Thursday, 2 February 2012

old woman

I am an old woman who has seen the sun set more times that she would wish.
Loves come and go, none keep the promise of the first kiss.
Friends venture off to journey through places I dare not see.
Family is a foreign word, a fractured house, a bad memory.

My breath is hot, my bones are firm,
My skin is supple and my body yearns.
But I am seated here, humming songs of resignation.
I am tired of this place.
I long for home.
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Sentimental and the rhyme scheme is very traditional. An acceptable first draft. I like the overall feel though.

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